I just love the way you get inside Callie's head. This made a lot of sense - much more sense than the episode made to me.
My biggest fear with her was abandonment because I've been abandoned so many times. And she made that fear my reality.
Her biggest fear was that I would have sex with Mark again. And it's time to make that fear *her* reality.
^^ I love this. It's so angry and bitter, and also so sad and desperate. I love the way you portray Callie as just wanting to feel wanted and loved and needed, but it's so obvious that she's looking for it in the wrong place.
I wish the episode could have got this across. Really really great fic. :)
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My biggest fear with her was abandonment because I've been abandoned so many times. And she made that fear my reality.
Her biggest fear was that I would have sex with Mark again. And it's time to make that fear *her* reality.
^^ I love this. It's so angry and bitter, and also so sad and desperate. I love the way you portray Callie as just wanting to feel wanted and loved and needed, but it's so obvious that she's looking for it in the wrong place.
I wish the episode could have got this across. Really really great fic. :)